Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Revision Introduction In-class Essay 4

The United States is the only country in America that has many people from other countries. the people who live-in those countries such as Mexico or Guatemala came to the United States to find a better life. However the people do not think about the risks for their children that born here. The children can suffer many consequences for the language and the change of life.
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2 comments:

  1. AnthonyApril 28, 2011 at 7:51 AM

    nicely put but try to make it a bit longer 8D

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  2. JipyoMay 10, 2011 at 9:49 AM

    Hey, Julio. If you see this message, please send a e-mail to me with your phone number. THank you.

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